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Friday, 18 August 2017

Descriptive Writing

Kia ora everyone!
We have been reviewing descriptive writing in class. We have also been revisiting blogging - lots pf us have our own blogs now!

Here is Luka's writing - we used this as a model when showing everyone how to post their learning.
Luka has his own blog, so be sure to visit and leave him some positive feedback!

THE INVISIBLE SLICE

The  invisible slices name  speaks for itself. Although it sounds like it's only abilities are to turn itself invisible and slice with its long and sturdy tail like overgrown wing. It also can shrink to as small as a mouse and  spits lime acid it can slither ninety km an hour without stopping! And it’s as heavy as three blue whales!








The  invisible slices name  speaks for itself. Although it sounds like it's only abilities are to turn itself invisible and saw with its long and sturdy tail like overgrown wing. It also can shrink to as small as a mouse and  spits lime acid. it can slither ninety km an hour without stopping! And it’s as heavy as three mega sharks! Never get close to this mystical hybrid it has the heart of a tyrannosaurus the skin of a chameleon

Descriptive writing - by Harrison

Kia ore everyone. This is my character description I have worked on this week Please leave a comment about my learning The royal blue robe on the ancient man.Holding a dragon staff and he,s got a pitch black crossbow

descriptive writing by jack

Hello my fellow bloggers

this is my character description i have worker on this week



The sapphire ruby dragon was swapping throw the the era as he shatibib his scales   
all over the land….
this dragon swoops down to eat his prey like a golden  hawk  on the horizon...
The omatete  mighty dragon sleeps in a colossal and round diamond cave….
As this dragon only eats gold and rowbe….this dragon is a robey dragon  bose not kill animals for spot just food….
This dragon has diamond teeth and robey skin and eats gold gods
This dragon is popile scales it can fly 1000 miles\ in the  sky dut when it's big it can fly one 1000.00/ miles in the sky.

Descriptive writing - by Taylor

Kia ora everyone! This is my character description l have worked on this week. Blackbeard He looks like a vicious demon. He looks like a black hearted pirate. He steals golden treasure. He looks like the devil. He crushes pirate skulls. He sails through the seven seas like a king He looks like a big frightening vicious demon. Blackbeard looks like a black hearted pirate. He looks like the dark black soul of the devil. The pirate steals shiny golden and colorful treasure. As Blackbeard pote a dark leather jacket on a mysterious man stormed past him Blackbeard followed him cefly. Hes crushed thick and strong skulls from dead pirates.