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Friday, 18 August 2017

Descriptive Writing

Kia ora everyone!
We have been reviewing descriptive writing in class. We have also been revisiting blogging - lots pf us have our own blogs now!

Here is Luka's writing - we used this as a model when showing everyone how to post their learning.
Luka has his own blog, so be sure to visit and leave him some positive feedback!

THE INVISIBLE SLICE

The  invisible slices name  speaks for itself. Although it sounds like it's only abilities are to turn itself invisible and slice with its long and sturdy tail like overgrown wing. It also can shrink to as small as a mouse and  spits lime acid it can slither ninety km an hour without stopping! And it’s as heavy as three blue whales!








The  invisible slices name  speaks for itself. Although it sounds like it's only abilities are to turn itself invisible and saw with its long and sturdy tail like overgrown wing. It also can shrink to as small as a mouse and  spits lime acid. it can slither ninety km an hour without stopping! And it’s as heavy as three mega sharks! Never get close to this mystical hybrid it has the heart of a tyrannosaurus the skin of a chameleon

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