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Friday, 18 August 2017
Descriptive writing - by Taylor
Kia ora everyone!
This is my character description l have worked on this week.
Blackbeard
He looks like a vicious demon.
He looks like a black hearted pirate.
He steals golden treasure.
He looks like the devil.
He crushes pirate skulls.
He sails through the seven seas like a king
He looks like a big frightening vicious demon.
Blackbeard looks like a black hearted pirate.
He looks like the dark black soul of the devil.
The pirate steals shiny golden and colorful treasure.
As Blackbeard pote a dark leather jacket on a mysterious man stormed past him Blackbeard followed him cefly.
Hes crushed thick and strong skulls from dead pirates.
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Term 3,
Term 3 2017,
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