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Friday, 1 September 2017

The Snow golem and Alex By Harrison

This week we have been learning about DASH? paragraphs for adventure stories.


  • D = describe the setting
  • A = use action
  • S = use speech
  • H = describe how the character is feeling
  • ? = use a cliffhanger or rhetorical question

We wrote collaboratively today.


Alex trudged in the thick snow he saw the
white wrecking ball like moon. Suddenly a
snow golem appeared from the ground.
Suddenly the snow golem was shooting hard snowballs at Alex. “Holy moley!” shouted Alex.
Bravely Alex killed the snow golem with a
minigun. After Alex had defeated the snow golem Alex felt great😎
 

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